TaterTomorrow 2021-01-11 04:04:48

Hello there! I've been an on-and-off user of Wick Editor. I enjoyed both "sections" of your game; the aesthetic is spot on. A title screen (with credits and plugs to your other content) and a few sound effects (without greatly increasing the file size) could bump up the production value of your game. Gameplay-wise, there is so much that can be done with what you have!

I have a couple questions tho: what is the end goal for this game? Do you have an end goal for the game in your head? Does Wick liking bread have anything to do with the goal, or is the dialog just there for teh lols? You don't have to answer these questions right away if you don't have any real idea. I am just a bit curious.

sackydzNG 2021-01-11 04:24:56

@TaterTomorrow Also yes, there's a lot more that could be done. I plan to expand upon what I know in a future game (or maybe even in this game if I'm able to do so).
Also thanks for the criticism!

Positron832 2021-01-12 09:31:48

One minor thing: I think extending the time between the bread animation and the test 1 finished screen would look better if extended by 1 second, since the finish screen pops up rather quickly than expected and you don't get enough time to fully understand what happens.

Positron832 2021-03-10 04:39:20

Hey I found a page that may help fix the problem with the page scrolling when pressing the up and down arrow: https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/creator-resources/game-dev-resources/unity-resources (in "Common Problems")