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A Wick Editor Test (Review Section)

Posted by sackydzNG - January 11th, 2021


I decided to make a game which is supposed to be a game centered around Wick Editor using, well, Wick Editor.

Criticism is very much needed.

Please leave your thoughts and criticism here in the comments section.


Game:

https://www.newgrounds.com/projects/games/1576975/preview

Update Thread: https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1462485#bbspost26675216_post_text

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Hello there! I've been an on-and-off user of Wick Editor. I enjoyed both "sections" of your game; the aesthetic is spot on. A title screen (with credits and plugs to your other content) and a few sound effects (without greatly increasing the file size) could bump up the production value of your game. Gameplay-wise, there is so much that can be done with what you have!

I have a couple questions tho: what is the end goal for this game? Do you have an end goal for the game in your head? Does Wick liking bread have anything to do with the goal, or is the dialog just there for teh lols? You don't have to answer these questions right away if you don't have any real idea. I am just a bit curious.

First off, I'm planning to add a title screen soon (one that actually moves). Secondly, do you like removing food? And thirdly, yes, the bread is actually an important plot point.

@TaterTomorrow Also yes, there's a lot more that could be done. I plan to expand upon what I know in a future game (or maybe even in this game if I'm able to do so).
Also thanks for the criticism!

One minor thing: I think extending the time between the bread animation and the test 1 finished screen would look better if extended by 1 second, since the finish screen pops up rather quickly than expected and you don't get enough time to fully understand what happens.

Kay then. Hopefully will be done by v0.09.

Hey I found a page that may help fix the problem with the page scrolling when pressing the up and down arrow: https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/creator-resources/game-dev-resources/unity-resources (in "Common Problems")