omg is that raymond
omg is that raymond
neato art as per usual. cant wait for the next artwork in 3 years!
thanks man expect a new one in about 26 months
great stuff! Also, just a heads-up; you can upload alt versions of your artwork on the same submissions, so there's no need to upload the edits on their own.
YOOOOOO I DIDNT KNOW YOU WERE BACK LOL
good art btw
thank you : D sometimes i forget to post my stuff on ng
Really love the lighting and colour choices in this piece. More like this, please!
(also, maybe stop using the phone or a mouse? I know good art doesn't have to come from anything fancy like an iPad or a drawing tablet, but it seems like you could touch upon your limitless potential if you were to draw "normally". But that's your choice. I know some artists who can make art with a mere touchscreen).
It's an improvement from your earlier work, but I still think it could use some improvements. I don't like those circles, they're very distracting, and not in a good way. Also, backgrounds that use airbrush tools (or any brush that looks quite blurry) don't contrast well with cel-shaded characters.
Aside from that tho, I really am a fan of this character design. Sire. the ears have way too much detail in them comparend to the other parts of the body, which I've stated in a previous review doesn't work well. But aside from that, it looks neat. Overall, a pretty good improvement!
It's a decent start. However, it's certainly incredibly flawed. The composition is, to say the least, not good. Why is the right side of the character mostly empty? Also, the cleanness of the top half (the wall part) doesn't mesh well with the floor part (which is quite messy). Adding some extra details on the walls (stains, wallpaper peeling off, etc) would've helped. Also, the choice of colours is quite bland. The colours chosen here do not express the "destroyed life of an alcoholic" feel very well. I do like the character design, it looks pretty good for a beginner.
Overall, I hope you can take my criticism to heart and continue to improve. I can see a ton of potential here! It just needs more practice. Overall, a 7/10.
thank u!!! im glad u gave me sum criticism. will improve next time!! :D
pyro fell off
A good time indeed
Idk what aloft even means in the first place so I'm not sure what an electronic version of it would look like but 9/10 nonetheless
Aloft means you're floating; you're up in the sky. A good way to remember it is that it's an anagram of the word "Float" which makes perfect sense.
Thanks for the comment also, my friend. :)
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